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G'day Avens, sorry I took so long to reply, I'll get to work on that immediately

Hey! and thanks for that review, I'm sorry i haven't had the time to read it but ill get on that right now :D

My apologies boon XD... i didn't see your post before I responded.

Hello and thank you for reviewing. I took all of your advice to heart, Sureal! :D Rukuen, I'm sorry if this part left you a bit confused, you see there ...

I hope you enjoy this piece and post comments and suggestions.

Hey guys, thank you very much for those reviews. I am going to take the time out now to apologize for the lateness of this edit. :oops: Posted: Thu Jul ...

Thank you very much for that review. Currently i dont have time to alter it but i will come back as soon as I do. :D

Hey, i promised you another part of chapter one, enjoy! It had grown dark and no-one but a flock of nosey sparrows noticed or heard the body of James Teal ...

wow avens i am extremely grateful for all of the time you have spent in reviewing my work. I'm just letting you know i will be away for a few ...

James spluttered and coughed dirt into his hand. He lay prostrate on the floor in front of his favorite tavern, “The Full Keg”. After a boisterous row with the owner, ...

James spluttered and coughed dirt into his hand. He lay, prostrate on the floor in front of his favorite tavern, “The Full Keg”. After a boisterous row with the owner, ...

thank you for your responce Avens, i am currently rewriting it completely and i will try and post it a bit later on today. ~just got to trust in the ...

The door slammed shut, grating across the wooden floor. A lock was drawn across the door. It spilt a cloud of rust and dirt under it, which diffused into the ...

thank you for responding, hehe yeh i have some major punctuation problems don't i? i am currently working on that,yet i do wish to spend the time it takes to ...